Aedaliegh of Arceldör · Short Stories

A Fortress for Aeda, Part 3

When I started this little blog experiment, I made a promise to push past the hardships and the apathy no matter what. I’ve failed at that more than I have succeeded, including this week.

Ever feel like you can’t focus? And you start to do something productive, and then you find yourself on facebook or netflix or amazon video (insert any website here, really) more times than you can count?

Welcome to the last week of my life as it applies to writing. I just didn’t feel like it. And when I tried to write, I really didn’t like what was coming out. And now that I’m about to hit the “publish” button, I’m still not that happy with it. But it’s Saturday and it’s the best I can give this week, and sometimes I realize that, in of itself, is enough.

If you’re new to the story, you can find Part 1 here and Part 2 here. Enjoy friends.

 

River rocks

 

A Fortress for Aeda is currently under construction. Come back later for some exciting news.

Aedaliegh of Arceldör · Short Stories

A Fortress for Aeda, Part 2

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Hi friends! Thanks for stopping by and giving me your time! If you’re new here, this is
Part 2 of my 6(ish) Part short story entitled “A Fortress for Aeda.” You can find A Fortress for Ada Part 1 here. If you’re not new, you may have noticed I changed the spelling of my characters name. Yep, yes I did. That’s all I have to say about that. 🙂

So, sit back. Drink your cup of coffee. And enjoy the next section of Aeda’s story.


A Fortress for Aeda is currently under construction. Come back later for some exciting news.


For Part 3 of Aeda’s Story, click here.

Ramblings · Uncategorized · Watercolor

Clive & I

Lewis was the first writer I ever fell in love with. He’s the one who taught me to love theology. He’s the one who showed me the power of a story. And so when I came across this quote in a Hobbit, a Wardrobe, and a Great War, I knew I had to do something with it. There truly is nothing better in the world than sitting around a fire with close friends. Add in s’mores and and twinkling lights, and you’ve found my happy place.

Look for a blog post coming soon on my takeaway from the book, called “Creating in Community” and the second part of my story “A Fortress for Aeda” coming on Saturday! (If you missed the first part, you can read it here).

Lewis Fire.jpgFeel free to download and print Lewis Fire Quote and share it with your friends.

 

 

Aedaliegh of Arceldör · Short Stories · Uncategorized

A Fortress for Aeda

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This is the beginning of a story that’s been forming (consciously) in my heart for over four  years, but I like to think it’s been writing itself for much longer. I didn’t intend to start Aeda’s story at this point in my life. This story deserves a better writer- a kinder one-  a more clever one than myself. So, my plan was to obviously wait until I was older and wiser (so, like 27?) but I can’t really keep it quietly sitting in my heart any longer. But instead of giving you the ever growing 17 page document that currently saved to my desktop, I’ve decided to edit and “publish” it a few pages at a time. For the next 6 (ish) Saturdays, I’ll be posting the next installments of Aeda’s story.

So, today, with much anticipation and excitement in my heart, I bring you…

A Fortress for Aeda, Part 1.

Update: A Fortress for Aeda is currently under construction, but you may find an exert from the story below.


She was sitting on the floor lacing her boots when she heard it: the crack of a tree limb. Her hands stilled as she listened to surrounding forest. Leaves crunched beneath footsteps like war drums growing louder with each new beat. Careful not to make a sound, she stood up and slipped silently across the dirt floor.

Someone was in the forest.

She was found.

She peered out the window and waited for the noisemaker to appear, squatting down low so that only her eyes peered out through the small slits in the wooden shutters. Her fingers brushed against the smooth wood of her bow as she loaded it with an arrow. She took a deep breath in through her nose and exhaled through her mouth.

“Animals know when there is danger around,” he father had told  her the first time he took her hunting. “But if you can control your breathing, they won’t sense anything is wrong.

A tree branch filled with bright yellow leaves pulled back and a man emerged from the thicket. His deep brown cloak and hunter green tunic made it seem as if he were one with the forest, a small tree who had just decided it would rather stand in the clearing. He crossed his arms and studied the dilapidated cottage, as if considering what might be inside.

This was not the first traveler who had passed by her cottage in the last three years she had lived there. Perhaps if she had met him earlier, she would have thought twice about the signet ring he wore on his right hand or the golden crest pinned on his cloak. But now she only concerned herself with details she thought were necessary: Was he armed? And how could she overcome him? Nothing else mattered.

He wasn’t a particular well built man, rather average. His soft brown beard was well trimmed, and his hair, though well combed, contained spots of grey. This knowledge brought the smallest grin to Aeda’s face. A well groomed beard meant that this man was no woodsman or farmer, but rather a comfortable gentleman. She had defended her cottage against men far bigger and rougher than this man.

He took a step towards her, and she snarled. He could not have come at a more inconvenient time. She had made a rather fine plan to go hunting and chop wood today. She didn’t have the time to be bothered with this stranger. She would scare him off quickly and then she could resume her plans.

“You’ll find no hospitality here,” she called out. “It’d be best if you kept walking to the next village. If you hurry, you can make it there before dark and I won’t have to waste an arrow on you.”

The man halted in the middle of his step and held his hands up in the air.

“You must be Aeda.”

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Guest Post #2: Emilee Rogers

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I’ve known Emilee for almost two years now. I met her at an after school program I worked for my first year in Birmingham. I always knew I liked her. She just radiates cool, but in that non-threatening, “I could be friends with her” way. We share a passion for telling kids about Jesus, and as we recently discovered, a passion for writing. Her vulnerability when she writes in truly heartbreaking, but in the best kind of way. When she writes, I feel what she feels. I see the picture she is painting with her words as if I had experienced it myself. And when I read this poem of hers, I knew I had to post it on my blog. While reading it, there were numerous times when I said, “YES! that’s exactly how I felt. that’s exactly what I would do.”And I’m challenged to be just as vulnerable in my writings as she is in hers.

Thanks for being my friend, Em, and for reminding me of the beauty found in opening our hearts and minds to others.

The Big, Tan Couch 

In a small room there’s a big, tan couch
threaded together by people’s secrets
cleaned week after week with their tears.
Painted on the walls are my thoughts.
Why do I think this way?
Why did they hurt me?
Why do I care?
All the why’s and why not’s
woven together week after week
woven in one big, tan couch.
In the pillows are my sobbed confessions.
How many times I’ve thought of ending it all myself.
How many barriers I know I have up.
How many people I wish would just stay.
How much I want it to all just go away.
I always grasp the blanket drape it over my legs and arms.
I subconsciously think it hides me hides me from vulnerability.
I want the thoughts to leave.
I want the questions to stop.
I want the curiosity to end
for peace and quiet to replace it.
I avoid eye contact
at least when I’m crying
I never thought I could cry this much.
My voice croaks and she can’t understand me.
I fight the urge to look at the clock.
I don’t want her to know that I just really want to leave
that sharing this is unbearable and uncomfortable.
I spill my heart week after week, minute by minute.
tick tick tock tock tock tick…still broken.
I seep into that big, tan couch. and blow into the tissues each week.
the couch is where my secrets lay and if it’s up to me,
its where they’ll stay.

Emilee Rogers is a wearer of beanies in the summer, a paper airplane maker, and a recent graduate of Samford University. For more of her writings, visit her blog where she posts way more frequently than I do.